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Tuesday, August 08, 2006

It Was Twilight

"Hush..." Mark said. His hand was pulling my arm as he led me up the thin pathway.

To me the pathway was barred by bushes and brambles. Once he pulled me through and I landed on a white bark tree.

"It's funny," he said. "When I went down this path, it was more welcoming."

But I knew what was wrong. Mark was taking me to a small shrine near the military base in Misawa, Japan. He and two of his friends had found it there one night when they were looking for a place to relax and drink sake.

Below the path was a small meditation pool. Bambo benches around the pool let one look deep into the pool and follow the small ripple of the water.

Yes, I knew what was wrong. This small altar and meditation area had been built to hold an avenging ghost, probably a woman. Mark, being male, would not have felt her revenge until or unless he had wounded her. But a female invading her garden would be hurt enough.

I placed my hand the white bark of the tree. Mark impatiently walked up the path. "I'll wait for you up here," he said.

I laid my cheek against the bark. "I promise," I said. "I won't hurt you."

I felt a resistance and then the path cleared.

"About time..." huffed Mark, then walked me the rest of the way to the altar.

"Who are those people?"

"Who?" He had not seen the old man in a kimono with his hand holding a very young japanese girl, who was also in a kimono.

"Just one thing," I said. Mark looked at me. He did not really like it when I became spooky. "We need to leave before twilight."

*****
Mark had become more and more obsessed with the altar and garden. He had taken Sylvia to see if it was dangerous. But "twilight"?, he smiled. Sylvia had been spookier than usual. He had wondered what game she was playing by not being able to see the clear path. He had to pull her onto the path several times.


Each day he came to the pond and meditated. Some days he would bring friends and other days he would come alone.


And then, he decided that this was the day that he would stay past twilight. Oh yea, he had read the stories of how the Japanese ghosts were more malevolent than the American ghosts. But if you belonged to a sophisticated society, you did not believe in ghosts. Period.


He stayed.


*****


"Syl, syl!!!" One of Mark's friends was white and shaking. He grabbed my arm. "Mark stayed there... we heard him screaming... we can't find him... "


Neither one of Mark's friends wanted to come with me. Finally, Terry climbed into my car after declaring that he would not leave the safety of my metal beast.


It was dark. The wind whipped around the car. I knew we were not wanted.


Once we arrived. I stepped out of the car. I could hear the wind moan and grind. It whistled around me like a dark beast. I walked to the pond and up the path.


"I won't hurt you," I said over and over under my breath. As I reached the path, I saw Mark in front of the altar. A young woman (older than the child I had seen before) had her arms wrapped around him. She was bent over his neck.


"Come to me" I called Mark. As he walked to me, she let him go. Her eyes turned red and I could see her long red tongue. When he reached me, I told him to get behind me.


The ghost floated up and up. Her gown floated around her. And then she fell towards us.


I yelled, "Stop." She hung in the air.


"Mine, mine, mine," I could hear, faintly.


We walked backwards, away from her.


"He is not yours." I said. "Go away. We are leaving. We will not come back."


She disappeared in the mist.


*****


Dark. Cold. Blood. New Life.
"He is not yours, " she said.
Disappear. Deadly sleep.


*****


As the car warmed up and Mark quit shivering, I asked him, "What happened?"


"I don't know," he said. "I don't remember."


"You are not going back," I said.


"Never."

13 comments:

Chana said...

i shouldn't have read this before bed time...that in itself is a compliment.

Cynthia E. Bagley said...

Thank you chana.. you make me smile. :-)

C. E. Chaffin said...

Good story. I assume your husband did a tour in Japan?

Strange, but I know some places are spooky. There's a dirt road leading into the forest not far from my house, and when I do my daily walk there I get a sense of foreboding. Last time I walked it I heard a huge swarm of bees and the direction from which they came kept changing. Also I found a large scat, probably a dog's, but there are mountain lions and bears in these forests. But the evil I sense there is more human than anything. I've never been afraid of the wild.

I think some places can be haunted by bad vibes. And hey, I'm a doctor!

C. E. Chaffin said...

Good story. I assume your husband did a tour in Japan?

Strange, but I know some places are spooky. There's a dirt road leading into the forest not far from my house, and when I do my daily walk there I get a sense of foreboding. Last time I walked it I heard a huge swarm of bees and the direction from which they came kept changing. Also I found a large scat, probably a dog's, but there are mountain lions and bears in these forests. But the evil I sense there is more human than anything. I've never been afraid of the wild.

I think some places can be haunted by bad vibes. And hey, I'm a doctor!

Cynthia E. Bagley said...

Hi CE... My husband went to japan... but when I was in the Navy I also went to Japan. (Misawa)

There are places in Japan that seem very welcoming. I loved the trees where prayers where hung on the trees. This place was not welcoming at all. I have heard some very scary japanese ghost stories too. :-)

7:36 AM

Sideon said...

Cyn - you did it again. You made me want to throw my arms around the monitor and hold it and squeeze it and hang on to the feeling of a wonderfully written story.

You continually amaze me.

Andrew said...

*shiver*
I wouldn't go back either. (Luckily for me I read this in the middle of the day...)

Cynthia, thanks again for popping over to "To Love, Honor and Dismay." I'm glad you enjoyed the advice. This was a challening one to write about today, as those types of problems are not necessarily handled quickly and easily.

All the best,
Andrew
P.S. Keep writing! :o)

Cynthia E. Bagley said...

Don...

Some parts of this story are real and true. I won't tell you which ones though... Most of my stuff have elements of truth. :-)
Glad you liked it.

Andrew... yes those Japanese ghosts are scary :-) I would rather go into an American haunted house instead of a Japanese haunted woods.

I think that you're blog is rather challenging to write. Keep up the good work.

Simeon's Peep Stone said...

Cynthia,
Great writing. Northern Japan is beautiful. I lived in Hachinohe for 5 months and went to Misawa many times. I love the prayer trees too. There's something so simple and pure about it. How long were you stationed there?

Cynthia E. Bagley said...

Hi Simeon.. Thanks for coming by.

I was in Japan for about 18 months. I was on Misawa AFB from 1990-1992. Great fun. One time I almost made it to Hachinohe for the Ice Festival... Gosh dang.. but didn't make it. :-)

Cynthia E. Bagley said...

Actually, when I think about it... I was in Japan for two years.

chiefbiscuit said...

That is scary stuff all right! Our son is in Kyoto right now - I hope he keeps away from places like that - or else has someone like your main character to protect him!

Cynthia E. Bagley said...

chiefb... Well... the japanese ghosts are usually summer ghosts (which is different from the western ghosts.

When I was there, I only found one bad spot. Most of their spiritual places have a nice feel to them.
:-)